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"Ready to Fight!" 8-Bit Author Tournament originally started Early 2016 as an open-ended comic where authors could create/use created characters to fight in one-on-one battles. Today, the comic has evolved into its own kind of experience, featuring new faces, old locations, and questions better left unanswered.


Kaizen v Quirby Part 1

April 5th, 2016, 5:40 pm

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>tfw you look at the alt text
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Reply Quirby64_:D, April 5th, 2016, 5:43 pm

Ohwow I did a thing I actually has no idea how to actually start the fight, so I went "screw it ill add a pokerface and a bad joke and call it a day"

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User's Comments:

Reply Cascade, April 5th, 2016, 8:28 pm

Casey's Comic Criticism So.. to lend you guys a hand with getting better at comics (which I hope is at least a small reason you've decided to join this multi-author thing), I've got some criticisms for you. I'll be posting some of these maybe almost every comic strip from here on out, or just the ones I feel need to be touched.
Anyway, here's what I have to say:
- Needs larger font size. The lettering is way too hard to read at this size. Also, increase the padding between the lettering and the edge of the space bubbles.
- You and Sparky have this strange issue with your panels where they have far too much negative space. Keep each panel focused on solely the action that's happening within it, and don't extend the size of each panel more than... 10-ish pixels or so past that for now. Play with it more later on.
- Drop the four panel format. It only works well for comedy gag comics, not anything actiony like this stuff.
-There's a posing issue in panel three. I mean, when have you ever seen someone land from a jump, or a jumping kick, just flat out standing straight up? I mean, not even in fighting games. They spend at least 5 frames in a slightly squatted animation. Pick a better pose for it or just make one if one's not there. Megaman sprites aren't too painful to deal with, after all.

That's about everything I have to touch on. There's no important grammar issues, and it's definitely not a bad place to start.

Reply Punchy, April 5th, 2016, 8:53 pm

Yo can you PM/link me to the background you're using?

Reply Crash guy, April 5th, 2016, 11:42 pm

@Punchy: I think he should post it here because of the ,,Credit" page

Reply Quirby64_:D, April 6th, 2016, 5:45 pm

@Crash guy: Well, the problem is that I edited a screenshot to make it look 2 player. Would I show both versions?

Reply Quirby64_:D, April 6th, 2016, 5:46 pm

@Cascade: That certainly helps, yeah I've always used the panel format so I guess this is a god place to start not using it then eh

Reply Crash guy, April 7th, 2016, 12:14 am

@Quirby64_:D: I think you should just post this screenshot somethere give Punchy the link in that case... IDK. Brawl, what are your thoughts?

Reply Brawlitup99, April 7th, 2016, 7:32 am

@Crash guy: I'm making a stage section for those kind of edits now. Quirby will be able to post it there (while giving credit to the original, of course!)

Reply Brawlitup99, April 8th, 2016, 10:12 pm

@Quirby64_:D: *ahem* stage section

Reply Quirby64_:D, April 9th, 2016, 10:36 pm

@Brawlitup99: i just tried bc I found the link, but I cant edit D:

Reply Brawlitup99, April 10th, 2016, 2:16 pm

@Quirby64_:D: Um.
Have you tried uploading it first?

Reply Quirby64_:D, April 12th, 2016, 10:33 pm

@Brawlitup99: oh you mean like uploading it like a comic.
jeebus I feel stupid, ech

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